Music has been used as a treatment in hospital because people find a benefit of music effecting on human’s body. Research has shown that music with a strong beat can stimulate brainwaves, so it can bring lasting benefit, besides, music can control breathing and hear rate in positive state. Music surrounds us, actually, we are living in a music world, and in other words, music affects everyone in positive state.
One experiment is that on subway, usually see people have headset and enjoy the music, while shaking the body with the fast beat.
Another experiment is that in restaurant, always playing light and slow music or piano music during dinner time.
Last paragraph is conclusion. Music make people’s live fill with spice.
Music has been used as a treatment in hospital because people find a benefit of music effecting on human’s body. Research has shown that music with a strong beat can stimulate brainwaves, so it can bring lasting benefit (what follows is a new sentence. You should separate it using a period), besides, music can control breathing and hear rate in positive state. Music surrounds us, actually, we are living in a music world, and in other words, music affects everyone in positive state. (how? This does not build of the ideas that you mention in the previous sentences)
One experiment is that on subway, usually see people have headset and enjoy the music, while shaking the body with the fast beat. (how is this an experiment? And what does it show?)
Another experiment is that in restaurant, always playing light and slow music or piano music during dinner time. (why?)
Last paragraph is conclusion. (are you telling me that this is the conclusion? You don’t really provide me with any conclusion because you have yet to develop the ideas) Music make people’s live fill with spice. (how?)
I agree with statement that, the music has a powerful affect on our body and mind.Research shows that music has relationship with our brainwaves activity. Faster beats make us more attentive and slower beats make us calm.now-a days music therapy has been using to cure the patients and becoming popular in medical field. music is anticipating to reduce stress, depression, breathing and heart disease.many people like to listen music when they get nerves. as its also work like a refreshment we can say that, music is not omly for relaxed but also for health
I agree with statement that, (why did you put a comma here?) the music has a powerful affect on our body and mind.Research shows that music has relationship with our brainwaves activity. Faster beats make us more attentive and slower beats make us calm.now-a days music therapy has been using (has been is present perfect tense, it requires a past participle like “used” to come with it. “Using” is a present participle. It shows an action in progress. “Has been” shows something that has just finished) to cure the patients and becoming popular in medical field. music is anticipating to reduce stress, depression, breathing (reduce breathing?) and heart disease.many people like to listen (you would listen “to music”) music when they get nerves (nerves is a noun. You don’t get nerves. You get nervous). as its also work like a refreshment (what do you mean?) we can say that, music is not omly for relaxed (relaxed is an adjective. What follows a preposition like “for” however are nouns. You need to say “relaxation”) but also for health
I agree with the statement,that music is a good tool for health. It has affect on body and brain in many ways, it is also depends what type of music people listen. From my own experience, the music is something, that is always with me. I start my day from good energetic music, it helps me wake up faster, makes me dance a little and keep me with this good positive energy all day. I also like to study with music, but for that time I listen some slow music, that doesn't bother my brain, and gives affect of good background sounds. Music is all around, it helps me be more motivate during my work out, or when I run long distance it is my company as well. It is good to be surround by good music, that put smile on your face, helps to relax your body and mind, or motivate you for some big accomplishments.
I agree with the statement,that music is a good tool for health. It has affect on body and brain in many ways (in what ways?), it is also depends what type of music people listen (how so?). From my own experience, the music is something, that is always with me. I start my day from good energetic music, (these are two complete sentences. You need to separate them by a period) it helps me wake up faster, makes me dance a little and keep me with this good positive energy all day. (and how does that help you?) I also like to study with music, but for that time I listen some slow music, that doesn't bother my brain, and gives affect of good background sounds. Music is all around, (again these are two complete sentences) it helps me be more motivate during my work out, or when I run long distance it is my company as well. It is good to be surround (you can be surrounded. Surround is a present tense verb, used with a plural noun. It is singular) by good music, that put smile on your face, helps to relax your body and mind, or motivate you for some big accomplishments.
I agree with the statement,we can not live without the music,it can impact on our emotions.From my experience,I think the music can help me to get more and more energy.When I get some troubles or hardly to choose something, music can make me to calm down,it can easier to think clearly what i really want.I think the music has another advantage for me,it can make me concentrate on my homework,I mean the light music,it is comfortable and and relax,it makes me easier to do my work.Music is a good tool for our health.
I agree with the statement,we can not live without the music, (this is a complete sentence. You need a period here) it can impact on our emotions.From my experience,I think the music can help me to get more and more energy. (how is emotions connected to energy?) When I get some troubles or hardly (what do you mean by “hardly”? You mean “hard”? Hardly means not a lot) to choose something, music can make me to calm down, (you are using commas when you should be using periods. Commas cannot in most cases separate complete sentences) it can easier to think clearly what i really want.I think the music has another advantage for me,it can make me concentrate on my homework,I mean the light music,it is comfortable and and relax (relax is a verb. You are trying to describe this music. You need to use an adjective. Use “relaxing”),it makes me easier to do my work.Music is a good tool for our health. (why? You don’t actually explain how it is good for the health)
First of all I like music a lot. And definitely I have no complain about that music has the power as like as medicine for not only human health but also for mental improvement. In the article researches also showed that music can be a great source of medication to heal the patients. Also listening to music we feel better when we are passing through very bad time. In fact healing by music treatment is now very well known to people and I think it's more reliable as it has no side-effect like other medications.
First of all I like music a lot. And definitely I have no complain (complain is a verb. You are trying to use a noun here. Use “complaint”) about that music has the power as like as (you would not say “as like as” you would just use “like”) medicine for not only human health but also for mental improvement. In the article researches also showed that music can be a great source of medication to heal the patients. Also listening to music we feel better when we are passing through very bad time. In fact healing by music treatment is now very well known to people and I think it's more reliable as it has no side-effect like other medications. (you need to give examples)
Music has become the part of our lives. It plays an important role to reduce stress, depression,anxiety and boredom of people. It is also a powerfull and helpfull tool for our mind and boby. It is also promoting relaxation,peace and clam. As in the passage, slower beats produce relaxation and higher beats help to alerts our thoughts and ideas.I agree with the author that music is a best tool for our haelth. Music is being used by individual to enhance the quality of life. Music has become an integral part of our lives. Whenever i want to realxt my mind and body I prefer to listen slow and classical music and whenever i feel excited and very happy i want to lisetn pop and fast music. whenever i feel sad or i feel very lonely or my mood is not happy i listen heart broken music and this kind if music give me relaxation. After lisiting music, my mind and body both feel good and i feel myself very easy and peacefull. So music has become important for our everyday lives. With music we do not feel we are alone. It helps to remember our old memories and days. I love emusic.
Music has become the part of our lives. It plays an important role to reduce stress, depression,anxiety and boredom of people. It is also a powerfull and helpfull tool for our mind and boby. It is also promoting relaxation,peace and clam (be careful about spelling. You just turned calm into clam, a seafood). As in the passage, slower beats produce relaxation and higher beats help to alerts (alerts is a verb. After “to” you need the infinitive form “to alert”) our thoughts and ideas.I agree with the author that music is a best tool for our haelth. Music is being used by individual to enhance the quality of life.(how?) Music has become an integral part of our lives. Whenever i want to realxt my mind and body I prefer to listen slow and classical music and whenever i feel excited and very happy i want to lisetn pop and fast music.(is that increase in quality of life? You need to explain) whenever i feel sad or i feel very lonely or my mood is not happy i listen heart broken music and this kind if music give me relaxation. After lisiting music, my mind and body both feel good and i feel myself very easy and peacefull. (I would just focus on this idea for the paragraph) So music has become important for our everyday lives. With music we do not feel we are alone. It helps to remember our old memories and days. I love emusic.
I agree with the author, because music are play important role in our life. For example; most people know that music can helps us to avoid depression and anxiety. I love to listen to soft music because it makes me very comfortable from stress. As article said, music may slow our breath and heart rate which make people calm down. Moreover, the most Joyful sounding music can make us happy. In addition, music could create certain atmospheres that soothe our mind such as I feel sad, but I can choose happy music to change my emotion. And sometime, people sing music to express their emotion. People need to express or change their different kinds of emotion in their life.
I agree with the author, because music are (music is singular. You would use the singular “is”) play important role in our life. For example; most people know that music can helps us to avoid depression and anxiety. (do most people know? That’s what you learned in the article) I love to listen to soft music because it makes me very comfortable from stress. As article said, music may slow our breath and heart rate which make people calm down. Moreover, the most Joyful sounding music can make us happy. (and so?) In addition, music could create certain atmospheres that soothe our mind such as I feel sad, but I can choose happy music to change my emotion. And sometime, people sing music to express their emotion. (and so?) People need to express or change their different kinds of emotion in their life. (this last sentence is a new idea that does not build off of what came before)
I agree with the "Is Music a Good Tool For Health" shows because I believe music can help people to reduce their stress and bring the inspiration of creativity. As we know listen music is so common in our daily life. We can listen that when we in subway or bus. So we will chose that direct way to relax. For example, we will has a lot stress or depression from daily, so we can listen some kind of music style we like or softly music. We can have a break for our brain. The other benefit is most artists agree with music can give them inspiration when their blankness. They think music is apart of creativity and they always listen music when they was doing creative work.
I agree with the "Is Music a Good Tool For Health" shows because I believe music can help people to reduce their stress and bring the inspiration of creativity. As we know listen(ing to) music is so common in our daily life. We can listen when we (are) in subway or bus. So we will chose that direct way to relax. (do we get relaxed?) For example, we will has a lot stress or depression from daily, so we can listen some kind of music style we like or softly music. We can have a break for our brain. The other benefit is most artists agree with music can give them inspiration when their blankness. They think music is apart of creativity and they always listen music when they was doing creative work. (what about textual references, or personal experience?)
Music has been used as a treatment in hospital because people find a benefit of music effecting on human’s body. Research has shown that music with a strong beat can stimulate brainwaves, so it can bring lasting benefit, besides, music can control breathing and hear rate in positive state.
ReplyDeleteMusic surrounds us, actually, we are living in a music world, and in other words, music affects everyone in positive state.
One experiment is that on subway, usually see people have headset and enjoy the music, while shaking the body with the fast beat.
Another experiment is that in restaurant, always playing light and slow music or piano music during dinner time.
Last paragraph is conclusion. Music make people’s live fill with spice.
Music has been used as a treatment in hospital because people find a benefit of music effecting on human’s body. Research has shown that music with a strong beat can stimulate brainwaves, so it can bring lasting benefit (what follows is a new sentence. You should separate it using a period), besides, music can control breathing and hear rate in positive state.
DeleteMusic surrounds us, actually, we are living in a music world, and in other words, music affects everyone in positive state. (how? This does not build of the ideas that you mention in the previous sentences)
One experiment is that on subway, usually see people have headset and enjoy the music, while shaking the body with the fast beat. (how is this an experiment? And what does it show?)
Another experiment is that in restaurant, always playing light and slow music or piano music during dinner time. (why?)
Last paragraph is conclusion. (are you telling me that this is the conclusion? You don’t really provide me with any conclusion because you have yet to develop the ideas) Music make people’s live fill with spice. (how?)
It is a outline of this essay, so I just post a lots short sentence
DeleteI agree with statement that, the music has a powerful affect on our body and mind.Research shows that music has relationship with our brainwaves activity. Faster beats make us more attentive and slower beats make us calm.now-a days music therapy has been using to cure the patients and becoming popular in medical field. music is anticipating to reduce stress, depression, breathing and heart disease.many people like to listen music when they get nerves. as its also work like a refreshment we can say that, music is not omly for relaxed but also for health
ReplyDeleteI agree with statement that, (why did you put a comma here?) the music has a powerful affect on our body and mind.Research shows that music has relationship with our brainwaves activity. Faster beats make us more attentive and slower beats make us calm.now-a days music therapy has been using (has been is present perfect tense, it requires a past participle like “used” to come with it. “Using” is a present participle. It shows an action in progress. “Has been” shows something that has just finished) to cure the patients and becoming popular in medical field. music is anticipating to reduce stress, depression, breathing (reduce breathing?) and heart disease.many people like to listen (you would listen “to music”) music when they get nerves (nerves is a noun. You don’t get nerves. You get nervous). as its also work like a refreshment (what do you mean?) we can say that, music is not omly for relaxed (relaxed is an adjective. What follows a preposition like “for” however are nouns. You need to say “relaxation”) but also for health
DeleteI agree with the statement,that music is a good tool for health. It has affect on body and brain in many ways, it is also depends what type of music people listen. From my own experience, the music is something, that is always with me. I start my day from good energetic music, it helps me wake up faster, makes me dance a little and keep me with this good positive energy all day. I also like to study with music, but for that time I listen some slow music, that doesn't bother my brain, and gives affect of good background sounds. Music is all around, it helps me be more motivate during my work out, or when I run long distance it is my company as well. It is good to be surround by good music, that put smile on your face, helps to relax your body and mind, or motivate you for some big accomplishments.
ReplyDeleteI agree with the statement,that music is a good tool for health. It has affect on body and brain in many ways (in what ways?), it is also depends what type of music people listen (how so?). From my own experience, the music is something, that is always with me. I start my day from good energetic music, (these are two complete sentences. You need to separate them by a period) it helps me wake up faster, makes me dance a little and keep me with this good positive energy all day. (and how does that help you?) I also like to study with music, but for that time I listen some slow music, that doesn't bother my brain, and gives affect of good background sounds. Music is all around, (again these are two complete sentences) it helps me be more motivate during my work out, or when I run long distance it is my company as well. It is good to be surround (you can be surrounded. Surround is a present tense verb, used with a plural noun. It is singular) by good music, that put smile on your face, helps to relax your body and mind, or motivate you for some big accomplishments.
DeleteI agree with the statement,we can not live without the music,it can impact on our emotions.From my experience,I think the music can help me to get more and more energy.When I get some troubles or hardly to choose something, music can make me to calm down,it can easier to think clearly what i really want.I think the music has another advantage for me,it can make me concentrate on my homework,I mean the light music,it is comfortable and and relax,it makes me easier to do my work.Music is a good tool for our health.
ReplyDeleteI agree with the statement,we can not live without the music, (this is a complete sentence. You need a period here) it can impact on our emotions.From my experience,I think the music can help me to get more and more energy. (how is emotions connected to energy?) When I get some troubles or hardly (what do you mean by “hardly”? You mean “hard”? Hardly means not a lot) to choose something, music can make me to calm down, (you are using commas when you should be using periods. Commas cannot in most cases separate complete sentences) it can easier to think clearly what i really want.I think the music has another advantage for me,it can make me concentrate on my homework,I mean the light music,it is comfortable and and relax (relax is a verb. You are trying to describe this music. You need to use an adjective. Use “relaxing”),it makes me easier to do my work.Music is a good tool for our health. (why? You don’t actually explain how it is good for the health)
DeleteFirst of all I like music a lot. And definitely I have no complain about that music has the power as like as medicine for not only human health but also for mental improvement. In the article researches also showed that music can be a great source of medication to heal the patients. Also listening to music we feel better when we are passing through very bad time. In fact healing by music treatment is now very well known to people and I think it's more reliable as it has no side-effect like other medications.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all I like music a lot. And definitely I have no complain (complain is a verb. You are trying to use a noun here. Use “complaint”) about that music has the power as like as (you would not say “as like as” you would just use “like”) medicine for not only human health but also for mental improvement. In the article researches also showed that music can be a great source of medication to heal the patients. Also listening to music we feel better when we are passing through very bad time. In fact healing by music treatment is now very well known to people and I think it's more reliable as it has no side-effect like other medications. (you need to give examples)
DeleteMusic has become the part of our lives. It plays an important role to reduce stress, depression,anxiety and boredom of people. It is also a powerfull and helpfull tool for our mind and boby. It is also promoting relaxation,peace and clam. As in the passage, slower beats produce relaxation and higher beats help to alerts our thoughts and ideas.I agree with the author that music is a best tool for our haelth. Music is being used by individual to enhance the quality of life.
ReplyDeleteMusic has become an integral part of our lives. Whenever i want to realxt my mind and body I prefer to listen slow and classical music and whenever i feel excited and very happy i want to lisetn pop and fast music. whenever i feel sad or i feel very lonely or my mood is not happy i listen heart broken music and this kind if music give me relaxation. After lisiting music, my mind and body both feel good and i feel myself very easy and peacefull. So music has become important for our everyday lives. With music we do not feel we are alone. It helps to remember our old memories and days. I love emusic.
Music has become the part of our lives. It plays an important role to reduce stress, depression,anxiety and boredom of people. It is also a powerfull and helpfull tool for our mind and boby. It is also promoting relaxation,peace and clam (be careful about spelling. You just turned calm into clam, a seafood). As in the passage, slower beats produce relaxation and higher beats help to alerts (alerts is a verb. After “to” you need the infinitive form “to alert”) our thoughts and ideas.I agree with the author that music is a best tool for our haelth. Music is being used by individual to enhance the quality of life.(how?)
DeleteMusic has become an integral part of our lives. Whenever i want to realxt my mind and body I prefer to listen slow and classical music and whenever i feel excited and very happy i want to lisetn pop and fast music.(is that increase in quality of life? You need to explain) whenever i feel sad or i feel very lonely or my mood is not happy i listen heart broken music and this kind if music give me relaxation. After lisiting music, my mind and body both feel good and i feel myself very easy and peacefull. (I would just focus on this idea for the paragraph) So music has become important for our everyday lives. With music we do not feel we are alone. It helps to remember our old memories and days. I love emusic.
I agree with the author, because music are play important role in our life. For example; most people know that music can helps us to avoid depression and anxiety. I love to listen to soft music because it makes me very comfortable from stress. As article said, music may slow our breath and heart rate which make people calm down. Moreover, the most Joyful sounding music can make us happy. In addition, music could create certain atmospheres that soothe our mind such as I feel sad, but I can choose happy music to change my emotion. And sometime, people sing music to express their emotion. People need to express or change their different kinds of emotion in their life.
ReplyDeleteI agree with the author, because music are (music is singular. You would use the singular “is”) play important role in our life. For example; most people know that music can helps us to avoid depression and anxiety. (do most people know? That’s what you learned in the article) I love to listen to soft music because it makes me very comfortable from stress. As article said, music may slow our breath and heart rate which make people calm down. Moreover, the most Joyful sounding music can make us happy. (and so?) In addition, music could create certain atmospheres that soothe our mind such as I feel sad, but I can choose happy music to change my emotion. And sometime, people sing music to express their emotion. (and so?) People need to express or change their different kinds of emotion in their life. (this last sentence is a new idea that does not build off of what came before)
DeleteI agree with the "Is Music a Good Tool For Health" shows because I believe music can help people to reduce their stress and bring the inspiration of creativity. As we know listen music is so common in our daily life. We can listen that when we in subway or bus. So we will chose that direct way to relax. For example, we will has a lot stress or depression from daily, so we can listen some kind of music style we like or softly music. We can have a break for our brain. The other benefit is most artists agree with music can give them inspiration when their blankness. They think music is apart of creativity and they always listen music when they was doing creative work.
ReplyDeleteI agree with the "Is Music a Good Tool For Health" shows because I believe music can help people to reduce their stress and bring the inspiration of creativity. As we know listen(ing to) music is so common in our daily life. We can listen when we (are) in subway or bus. So we will chose that direct way to relax. (do we get relaxed?) For example, we will has a lot stress or depression from daily, so we can listen some kind of music style we like or softly music. We can have a break for our brain. The other benefit is most artists agree with music can give them inspiration when their blankness. They think music is apart of creativity and they always listen music when they was doing creative work. (what about textual references, or personal experience?)
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